Can Reviewers See Within?

Are on-line book reviews the worst sort of book report, emblematic of the neo-Western education system combined with the Internet’s come one/come all open forum? Or is it a mixed bag of well-meaning, passionate readers versus the cranks who have an agenda? For controversial books, a site visitor to Barnes & Noble or Amazon can easily determine who gave a book lots of stars as opposed to just one.

One example is Sam Harris’s The End of Faith: Religion, Terror and the Future of Reason. My own take on this book, just to be part of the crowd for the moment, is that it asks many more questions than wants to answer about faith, religious following, and the future of respectful, democratic societies. That, of course, was his goal: who can rightly say what should be done anymore than decrying what can be done? Naturally, Harris expresses his opinions, which is to say he has views on what should be done in the case of Faith vs. Rationalism: it is time for people of the 21st century to put aside superstitions (and religious dogma) of the 1st Century. He argues against an established tide of religious sociability and, in many instances, fervency. Such people and groups are not about to change because of some scientific, historical, and anecdotal evidence suggesting we all would be better off without religion. So here we are, a book that offers evidence, suggestions, and argument for a position. What else is new? Actually, since 9-11 attacks and attacks throughout Europe, it can be said this book and its arguments are new in the face of political correctness, an unwillingness to challenge religions from the outside, and an even greater unwillingness to challenge religions from within.

Readers, it should be said, come to a text with their own preconceived notions: this is not good reading habits, but it exists; few of us can truly step around what we already believe. And the reviewers’ varied understanding (and misunderstanding) of Harris’s book show this very fact. Often enough, however, so-called website reviewers forget that Harris has but one opinion, which he essays to back up with evidence, taken from history, psychology, consciousness studies, religious texts, and numerous other areas that would shed light on his thesis. But for so many, there seems more room to question their ability to read and review a book, more than a question of the book’s merits.

For example, some reviewers try to understand what it means to review a book, and they look at Harris’s thesis and (more or less) judge it against the evidence presented, but then allow their personal views to bleed out, and sully the entire reviewing intent:

A reviewer, A reviewer, 03/28/2006 Customer Rating for this product is 3 out of 5
Harris’s Ironic hypocrisy
While I am thoroughly impressed with the rationality of End Of Faith,and agree ,for the most part, with the points,Harris topples his tower of reason on several levels.The fact that he vaguely touches on agnosticism is weird but after further analysis,I understand why.No great effort comes without an agenda. […] Harris deliberately skirts any in-depth relationship between politics and religion(and the question of which was evil first).He fails to prove the much needed point to maintain his thesis that religion ,not politics,is the culprit. My second problem is related to the fact that Harris cannot avoid exposing his own political bias!Ironically,Harris ,despite his outrage with the historical horrors perpetrated due to religious convictions,somehow supports both the Iraq war and Bush himself(although he at least admits Bush ’s use of religion to get votes was outrageous).I ask how can one write an entire book dedicated to rationality and (peace),yet support the Iraq war and the Bush administration (albeit subtly)?I am emmediately suspicious when I realize Harris is truly attemtping to pull off this hugely hypocritical circus act. How ironic is it indeed that Harris is both an atheist ,and a Bush supporter? It’s not surprising at all.There is indeed an underlying agenda here.

Kerry Leimer (Makawao, Hawaii United States)

It is both odd and a mistake to refer to this book as “ineffectual”. Mr. Harris points out something which, one hopes, we all already know. And that is, despite it’s ability to blind us emotionally, despite the fact that in most cases people come to embrace religion through some form of indoctrination, or in the case of President Bush, come to it as a substitute for other forms of intoxication, religion as an artifact of human thought has long outlived its usefulness. We are no longer tribes squatting in huts teaching our children that the world is flat and if the weather turns it’s because some god is angry about the clothes we wear. We now have big, powerful and easily portable weapons.

What is effective about this book is that it finally opens the door to this virtually taboo observation: Middle east or West, by being treated as infallible and unquestionable, religion quantifiably does more harm than good. Mr. Harris points out just how utterly antiquated and basically wrong so many religious tracts are by using the tracts themselves. Proof enough that religions no longer hold the key to human happiness is demonstrated by the convenient “editing” of some tenets of faith by none other than the faithful who, in our culture, get closer to god by picking and choosing those aspects of the word of god which best suits the starkly more secular and practical aspects of their lives. Is everybody comfy? Good.

R. Goldstein “Usually Concerned Citizen” (Left Coast)
(REAL NAME)
Pages deep into Sam Harris’ indictment of Islam, I recalled documentary footage of Senator McCarthy wagging papers in front of the camera and screaming “This civilization will die!” if the Communists weren’t rooted out and vanquished. Harris is less histrionic but similarly insistent that Muslims are a menace to the West. Within this supposed treatise on reason over superstition is a loathsome fear of readers of the Koran. He depicts leaders of Islamic theocracies as 14th-century primitives who are in danger of gaining 21st-century weapons. This book is dangerous not because it will shake the faith of religious believers, most of whom will ignore it or having read it will go on believing regardless. Demonizing Muslims and criticizing pacifism as it does, the book is intellectual cannon fodder for those favoring military conquest of Iraq and Iran. After ridiculing the Old Testament mandates for stoning adulterers and killing neighbors who profane the Sabbath, Harris tries to make the case that the majority of modern Muslims follow similarly vicious doctrinal commands. His evidence is flimsy, but anybody convinced by it will soon become suspicious of their Muslim neighbors. The book adds tension to an already tense situation.

Other reviewers clearly have an agenda of their own, and offer no evidence behind their words or ad hominem attacks:

Betty Ford, A reviewer, 08/07/2005 Customer Rating for this product is 2 out of 5
Making a religion of rationalism
In attempting to discredit religion, Sam Harris succeeds only in making a ‘religion’ out of rationalism. He reduces human experience to what can be replicated/verified scientifically, and does not distinguish ‘faith’ from ‘beliefs.’ Although he does well in showing how science tries to unravel the ‘mystery’ in life, he fails miserably at understanding religion’s struggle to honor the ‘mystery.’ He speaks only of religion at its worst–fundamentalist, extreme, arrogant–and seems closed to/ignorant of good religion, which seeks to understand the ‘why’ of the universe, making use not only of science, but also of art, music, human relationships, nature and other creative endeavors. We humans are not merely rational animals, but psychic and social as well. By focusing merely on the rational, Sam Harris dismisses an important part of the human experience and impoverishes his work.

M. Vince Turner, an ordained Minister, 11/14/2005 Customer Rating for this product is 4 out of 5
Challenging the Believer’s perspective ..
Passing in Review “The End of Faith: Religion, Terror and the Future of Reason” by Sam Harris Review by M. Vince Turner November 2005 Author Sam Harris takes a no-holds-barred assault on religion in his book The End of Faith. Harris’ assault, however, is not vindictive. Like a finely sighted assault weapon, Harris picks his targets carefully and hits a bull’s eye with each salvo against organized religion and the legions that come together to form organized religion. Christians, Jews and Muslims do not escape his sights. Harris takes on this subject with righteous aplomb, ripping away the veil of sanctimoni-ous cover that has shielded each religious sect so affectively for too long. As an ordained minister, I found much of The End of Faith right on target. Harris elaborates myriad aspects of organized religion that have come to make too much religion the enemy of God rather than being the advocate of God among groups that lay strong claim to “their” God. At times Harris applies near-surgical skill, pulling away the cancerous flesh that clothes so much of religion today and he shows how religious praxis has created too much harm in this world and how religion continues to do so. The End of Faith is not a book that will be well-received by the self-righteous Christians, so many of whom assert “their” God is the only God and that their “God” accepts only certain people or certain groups within this cosmos we call Earth.

And then there are the partisans who have merely found an outlet for their proselytizing, and have no notion of (nor ability for) what a review requires:

Christopher Charles, A reviewer, 07/17/2006 Customer Rating for this product is 1 out of 5
THE END OF RELIGION
Harris wants to do away with religeon, heaven and hell. And I saw the dead, small and great, stand before God and the books were opened: and another book was opened, which is the book of life: and the dead were judged out of those things which were written in the books, according to their works. And the sea gave up the dead which were in it and death and hell delivered up the dead which were in them: and they were judged every man according to their works. And death and hell were cast into the lake of fire. This is the second death. And whosoever was not found written in the book of life was cast into the lake of fire.Revelation 20:12-15 Whether Harris or any one else believes this or not it does not matter for it still remains true. God is not in your mind but in heaven and alive on this earth.

I have a question for this type of blatantly dogmatic “reviewer”: why did you give the book even a single star, if you thought it so wrong?

Some people don’t seem as if they’ve ever read a book before:

G. D. Grubbs

One huge irritation about the layout of the book itself is that there are 227 pages of text, but 63 pages of NOTES! Most of the notes could have simply been incorporated into the text rather than the superscript. I understand they do this for people that cannot handle reading much, but those are not the type of people this book is targeted for. The prospective audience would read every last note in the back. I should go easier on the guy since it is his first book, and the editors should have paid more attention.

And finally—but there never is finality to reviews or reviewers—we find this back and forth between reviewers who entered a posting discussion about “The End of Faith”:

nonamespecified says:
Much as I admire the online mp3’s of Sam Harris’ articulate lectures, and the courage of his crusade to call out the delusions of the masses, I must say he is a bit naive re the true ‘variety of religious experience’. People do in fact have radical altered states of consciousness all the time, via NDE, spontaneous kundalini, or endogenous DMT. Reducing such transcendent experiences of cosmic consciousness to pineal gland secretions is not going to really ‘explain’ anything. I think he didn’t really spend enough time at the ashram or in sesshin.

mike333 says:
while I’m somewhat sympathetic to where you’re coming from, there are a couple of things I want to point out. First, if anyone is being reductive it’s you. For you to claim that Harris reduces religious experiences to “pineal gland secretions” is patently absurd. Where in the book, or in any interview with him, have you heard him say that the pineal gland is solely responsible for religious experiences. Secondly, you also kind of burst a bubble in your own argument by bringing up endogenous dmt. Recognizing that dmt is responsible for a spiritual experience seems just as reductive as saying that the “pineal gland” or any other part of the brain is responsible. Both reduce a complex experience to neurophysiology.

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Shallow, December 1, 2006
Reviewer:    I. Strenski (Los Angeles, CA USA) - See all my reviews
(REAL NAME)
I have made a career of being critical of religion, and have published a good deal on religious violence. So, at first, I greeted this book with interest as something that might have been consequential. Instead, the author never goes beyond being a naive juvenile rant. The scholarship is practically non-existent, nothing new is said, but what is said reaks of prestentiousness.One measure of the shallowness of this book is that the author never makes any distinctions among kinds of religion. I think I threw the book in the trash.

[responses to strenski]:

K. McKnight

Why don’t you just admit you couldn’t understand the big words and let it go at that? “Never makes any distinctions among kinds of religions”? Clearly you didn’t read beyond page five. Next time, don’t interrupt when the adults are talking.

Thomas D. Gulch
These guys are almost always other authors who are pissed their own books aren’t selling
or religious crazies posing as rationalists. I always check out their voting history - if this is the only book they have reviewed you can bet their motivations aren’t good.
Mr. “strenski”, from his comments seems to be another really ‘clever’ bible thumper fooling
(nudge,nudge, wink,wink) everyone.

The Realist
Ms. Strenski is such a prolific writer, I couldn’t find a single thing she’s written on Google (I didn’t count her myspace page, as it seemed to be just her friends saying hi). If that’s her career, she needs to find a new one. An unpublished writer is just a person running up the power bill.

Brother Russell
My favorite phrase in this review is “reaks of prestentiousness”. Ms. Strenski isn’t certain whether she threw Sam Harris’s book in the trash. I would suggest that perhaps she accidentally threw her dictionary in the trash, and Mr. Harris’s book remains on the shelf, unread.
Grow up, show up!

We see here, anyway, people arguing expansively on all points in Harris’s book. But is this the discussion we are looking for? And are these actual book reviews? Oddly, little has been said of Harris’ book in the halls of congresses around the world. We hear little said in churches, mosques, or synagogs. Lines have been drawn, and few of the important groups are willing to discuss doing away with religion. Of course, this is their right—at least it is in a free society. Politicians aren’t going to touch this subject. They have power to hang onto. Religions won’t go near this subject. Do you think they want to give up their faith (or power over people)? So the arguing, mostly, comes from the average person on the street.

I don’t disparage this argument one bit, even if I cannot rightly call “reviews” their nit picking single sentences from within an overall treatise that asks, ultimately, for a higher rational “system” to replace the “fantasy legends”, and “hysterical”, “violent dogmatism” found in all religions (all Harris’s terms). I don’t disparage people’s talking about this subject because it is ultimately the people on the street who will someday turn—for better or worse—the political and ecumenical opinions that do shape history, often enough. After all, this is how Judaism abolished sacrifices to their fickle God, and how women were finally allowed to become rabbis. It is also how Christians were able to expel the blood-lusting Inquisition masters after hundreds of years of torture and murder of “infidels”: those who believed otherwise than the church. It is also how, someday, Muslims will, too, quell their own brand of violence, misogyny, and outright hate of any religion not their own. Since Islam has come a little late to the monotheism game, I’m not surprised it needs a couple hundred more years to percolate, and understand how it needs to act to fold itself into societies of reason.

Given this convergence between the specter of modern religion and diarrhetic free flow of information and opinion (I do not exempt myself from this second area), there still leaves us with a mass of people drawing lines. Given their upbringing, thoughts on varied subjects, or research and then thought, or drift toward religious belief and obedience, we all often stand in our respective corners. Unlimited corners do not exist, but enough do exist that polarize people on several fronts. The fact remains, Harris has presented us with an essay, an attempt at presenting a position based on prior study, life experience, research, much thought, and finally a reason to put it down on paper for all to read, think about (in all forms and functions), and then begin to discuss the merits of his reasoning. He says himself near the end of the book that he has no hold on truth. He does not proclaim himself a prophet, like those who helped begin the religions we find wielding power today.

Now, we can all pick it apart, rationally or irrationally, as the case may be. Arbiters of truth are many in this free-speech world, as public opinion makes cases for war, peace, religious dogma (or change) [witness Vatican II; the Enlightenment; the Inquisition; Westernized Islam that eliminates the hate speech plentifully found in the Q’uran], politics, and a host of other plans brought from the realm of idea to physical acts.

And people do pick apart books, expecting that any essayist not only prove beyond any possible doubt his position (or else fuck off), but expect essayists also to cover every possible issue (or else shut up). This is the position that societies have always enjoined upon thinkers willing to put themselves (sometimes literally) on the line. Two things, however: 1) humanistic ideas cannot be proved to all’s satisfaction, but ideas can be exposed, and thus create a discussion, especially if reasonable, rational (but never expecting ALL) parties to participate; 2) covering every issue of an idea to satisfaction of every reader is obviously an impossible task (and some will still argue “that answer isn’t good enough!”), but even to try would take up several volumes of pages, and likely obscure the heart of not only the issue but the author’s essay.

So Harris’ book has flaws. What book doesn’t? His argument has flaws. Which argument doesn’t? He does, however, and ultimately, create a foundation for discussion. Many books refuse even that, particularly the three religious texts of monotheism in our never-ending troubled times … each compounding the troubles we find in an ever-shrinking global society (not to mention marketplace). Now then, what can we do? What are we supposed to do? Align ourselves with Bibles that refuse open thought, discussion, argument, and the possibility to enlighten an ever-darkening world? That’s one way to look at the world, and its problems. It’s been the way for thousands of years. Isn’t it time we look for alternatives, however “flawed” they might seem to people living in closed societies and groups?

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